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Fic reviews [more info]; September 11 - September 17.

Anniversary by elleian [PG-13]
Author's summary: It's been two years.
My 2 cents: Eh, take it or leave it. There's no indication that these are Harry and Draco except for the names.

seven ways from here to there by snottygrrl [G]
Author's summary: post-war. harry's suspicious of malfoy.
My 2 cents: Immediate question: why was Harry incarcerated with Voldemort? Voldemort wants to kill Harry, not take him prisoner. Anyway, I liked all the different characters' perspectives, and not a word is wasted, plus the ambiguous ending makes me happy in the pants.

Clarity In The Aftermath by kcstories [PG]
Author's summary: The carelessly cast spell brings a startling realization (set during HBP, more or less).
My 2 cents: This couldn't possibly have happened during HBP, more or less, since Harry would've mentioned a visit to the hospital wing to see Draco, and he would have mentioned making Hermione cry. That said, I wouldn't have minded if this had happened during HBP, though. It's certainly a lot more than Harry listening to Ginny sitting back and telling him that he'd done the right thing when he'd cast Sectumsempra. :|

Deadfall by corvidae9 [PG]
Author's summary: An invisibility cloak, a double agent and multi-layered trap.
My 2 cents: This reads quite well and IC, even without backstory to explain the relationship -- if you can imagine spy!Draco (I can). If the idea of spy!Draco makes you laugh and laugh, then it doesn't work. It's not really a standalone story, more like a vignette out of a longer story that isn't going to get written.
Tags: criticism, hd_prophet, meta:harry/draco
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